Hello everybody!
Today I would like to
write about the recent elections in the USA.
As some of you may
know, Mr. Donald Trump won the election, what is really shocking for many
citizens.
Let us analyse the
reasons why so many people voted for the republican. One reason, for example
is, that they think he wouldn’t care about someone breaking the rules and maybe
the population of the United States believes that they would have more liberties
because of that fact. Trump promises that he will eliminate ISIS. As
curious as it sounds the population may think it is a good idea to vote for Trump. He
also made the pledge of putting the economy back where it belongs.
My personal thoughts
about this issue are the following. I am not qualified to give you exact
information about this topic because I did not engage that much in it. But
from the minority of the facts I know, I think Hilarie Clinton would have been
the better choice because she seems to be really interested in doing the best
thing for her country and she is aware of the big responsibility a president
has.
Thanks for reading my
entry. See you soon.
Roberta.
Dear Roberta,
AntwortenLöschengood blog entry. However, you made several spelling mistakes and a few grammar mistakes:
-Don’t forget the comma: “As some of you may know, …”
-Mind the spelling: It should be “analyse”, NOT “analize”, it should be “republican”, NOT “republician”, it should be “economy”, NOT “economie”, it should be “choice” not “choise”,
“responsibility and NOT “responibility"
-It should be “ONE REASON, for example, is that they think…”
(because with “One of them” it is not clear whether you are referring to the people or the reasons”)
-“eliminate ISIS” (without THE)
-As curious as it sounds the population may think it is a good idea to do so. – DO WHAT? TO VOTE FOR TRUMP?
“information” is uncountable! “give you exact information”
“I did not engage that much IN it”